写得相当不错,老外完全可以看懂,赞一个!
如果要改的话,那么,
scar是可数名词,加s变复数;或者前加定冠词the,变为staining the fibrotic scar;
the fibrotic scar size可以改为the size of the scar,fibrotic可以省略;
另外时态要一致。i have used laminin-specific antibody,but it didn't work.可改为
I used a laminin-specific antibody, but it didn't work.