帮忙英语作文纠错，谢谢，越快越好

a name’s Larry’ guard 表达 一个叫拉里的保安 应该用后置定语 a guard named Larry (whose name is Larry)
Larry is a father of Nick 表达 拉里是个父亲，有个叫尼克的儿子 不可以这么表达，可以说成 Larry is a father who has a son called Nick. Larry has a son, Nick. 下一句 One day,he lose his job again,so he has to find another stable and good job.这里请注意，one day是过去时的时间标志，应该将lose,has变成过去式lost, had. 下一句的gets改成got.下面的动词都应为过去式。 But Larry doesn’t know how amazing is his job. 这里是个语法点，how + 形容词 + 名词 + 谓语动词 But Larry didn't know how amazing his job was. 下面这句work是不可数名词 不能用a，He thinks it is a boring and terrible work. 改为：He thought it (this job) was boring and terrible. 下面的Lots of interesting things happened at here. 错在here前面不可以用介词at。而且这句写的很中式英语。Larry is a little scary and want to give up several times but in the final,he does his job very well. 这句 a little单独用表示一个小的东西比如 a little girl小女孩
你想表达的是有一点害怕，应该再加上bit，a little bit 表示 有些，finally比较好。最后he did a really good job.表示他表现出色。下面收获这个词不要用gain，可以写成一个短句：what I got from this movie，显得像英语。第四个收获中失败这个名词应该是failure.而且前面不用the.这里是泛指。第五条成功的动词是succeed,success是名词。

总结以上，请允许我为您的英语学习提一下建议：
学习英文单词一定要注意词性
记叙文普遍用过去时
多掌握一些看到过的原版英文而不是用汉语的字对字写英文

希望您学习进步。愉快！